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The Overflowing Bra

MysteryGuy9215
A Special Serum
A story of jealousy. Two girls, extremely jealous of one of the popular girls and her bust size. One of them crafts a serum that will make them bigger, but with somewhat unexpected and over the top results.

This was an RP I did with another writer, named AlphaVragg735
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 ToBEQueen
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Well written story, fellows.  From a female perspective, loved it.  See you and AlphaVragg on dA!  
 deus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
Good stuff.  I would like to see a longer story, but I enjoyed it.  Thanks for writing!
 Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Excellent job!
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