The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bra Option Plus
A story of Jessica and Kyra. One day, one of them finds a strange bra with the power to increase her bust size. But how far will it go?
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Excellent story! One of the better magic-bra stories I've seen on here for sure.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Fun premise. Grammar needs some polishing and transitions were sometimes abrupt. I would have liked to have seen a bit more back and forth before going to "11".

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Very good. There were two minor spelling issues, but I didn't take any points off for it. I would've loved to see the competition aspect of this drawn out further; friendly at the beginning and then more acrimonious. Still, I enjoyed it quite a bit. Thanks for writing!

Anny Nonny Mouse
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really liked this one. The competitive theme is really fun in a story like this. Hope to read more of your stories!

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