With Chrissie out for the night with a hot date, Mara discovers that giving into temptation can do wonders for a woman's figure, though trying to stop when she's had too much can be more than she can handle.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 5.00
Lily Bunny
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Good effort, but this hasn't been the best piece you wrote. It feels like you are trying to add on to a story that is more or less finished by having one of the already hugely endowed girls....grow huge. I dunno, I would have liked to see them talk one of their super skinny customers into getting as huge as they are or something, start with a blank slate. Still a enjoyable enough read though, nice work.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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