A young woman's determined quest to achieve her lifelong fantasy of producing milk meets some twists and turns along the way.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.78
- BE: 4.78
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.67
Selma
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 2
Being a professional ssmaalen, he should know what the clients needed. As a advertising ssmaalen , he should know his client's target market. My friend is an internet marketing agent and help client to find suitable web media for advertising, I think he is quite professional. :)
Mort-Snerd
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Can't wait for the other chapters!
AGayNamedRyanInspiredMyOpenness_CRob.
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story moved me. Because if it's cause and it's predecessor(s). Fullfillment 1-3 filled my lusting desire, and # 4 tickled me to believe it to be true. Please describe her breast growth in more detail in future chapters, and comment on her lactation as well. Her milk is the sole reason I've read your story, and the reason I'm actually taking time to comment on the outstanding job you've done, as well as to increase the detail that can be given to the milking process. I'd adore seeing future stories about her milking, and description of the sweetness of her milk for her lover to behold.
Thank you,
LactationLover23
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! 1 minor complaint though, dont use .txt, use anything but please. Adobe, open office .rtf
deux anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Honestly, this is one of the best stories I have read this year. Good plot, very readable and didn't spot a single typo. The characters are also well developed (no pun intended), quirky but plausible.
Ithaca
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic storyline, writing and theme, can't wait for more.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Squigy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
tusdine
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A great start and I really want to read more! Please don't stop here!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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