belle0887-stx@yahoo.com
As a backwoods farmer in the archaic world of Noblash, Andrin can't seem to find a suitable mate. All of the women that he knows are definitely buxom.. but the only girl his age is rumored to have some sort of problem? Perhaps that is what causes him to go searching for the temporary lust found in the arms of a magical nymph. However, things aren't always as they seem.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.94
- BE: 4.83
- Characters: 4.89
- Technical: 4.94
Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Not sure how I missed this one when it was posted. This is one of he best stories on the site. It hits all the right buttons AND it's just a good story. Well written, great characters, interesting world. Oh, and really hot transformations, male into mega stud and female into near goddess. Perfect!
knightsick
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
you should write sequel to this
redog
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! I liked the length, not to long and not to short. Keep up the great work!
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, well executed!
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
No negatives, only positives. Great story!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The backstory was rich, but not overwhelming. The characters were completely believable. The grammar impeccable. You cinched it with the multiple rounds of BE--that is the best part, when you think things have gone far enough and then, for some reason, they go even further.
Overall excellent story.
knightsick
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
BEFantasy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful story! Best I've read in recent memory. Thank you!
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked this story. While the plot-twist was excellently written and made for exciting reading, I was kind of sad about what happened to the nymph in the end.
Are all of the nymphs in the world like this, or just this select one, or is it just an unfortunate aspect of their biology on the second full moon to be possessed by another being? So many mysteries!
I enjoyed the way you written and described the nymph before the second full moon, her personality, and extremely petite, yet hyper-sexually developed body was a rare and wonderful treat in erotic literature that almost made me wish the plot-twist didn't happen, and instead there was a happier ending where the cute nymph lives with Adrin and Penelope, and helps them with their problems.
cman
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Cute story. It's a shame more wasn't written about /after/ the last growth...
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very well done. Only thing that bothers me is that the lead is stuck in a very solvable ignorance for most of the story for no good reason, but I suppose without that artifice there's no story at all, is there?
biggun
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very nice fantasy world you've come up with here. I think I like it better than the "Game of Thrones" world, at least.
Xero
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
That story was great! I felt as if I was the main character in this story.
Squigy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Top flight stuff. Hit all the right buttons, like your other stories.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've enjoyed every story by you BB47, this one is no different.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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