The entire New Girl story in one 'book'.
Alex finds a magic ring that can transform himself and several new friends in any way that they want.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 2.75
- Technical: 4.00
Nova25
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Amongst the most well paced stories, of decent length, I have read.
FunkForTheFunky
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
Paper thin characters dont hurt this gleefully perverted erotica. Totally agree with feo.
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I enjoyed this story a great deal; it had some staying power to it, and had a lot of fun with itself.
I really could have done without the homophobic "this doesn't make us gay" nonsense, though.
Feo Takahari
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This is the most perverted story I've ever read that was also cute and happy, and I have to give it major kudos for that. None of the characters were especially complex or interesting, and the speed with which they rushed into having kinky sex with each other strained belief a little, but the sex scenes themselves were so fun and cheerful that I couldn't help but smile. Good job overall--but next time, spend a little more time building up to the (literal) climax.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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