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The Overflowing Bra

How Billy Tooley Saved Another Planet
The last one was so short, happyguy wrote another. Take two, they're small! (Although after this tale, not all that much is ""small"" anymore...).
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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wish there was more BE. Maybe Billy could have caused parallel 'results' when he came back. Like to the gal next to him taking the math test. Otherwise, great story.

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