ghost_of_christmas@yahoo.com
Written on new years eve do to lack of sleep this story might contain quite a few grammar errors.
The story's central theme is Penis expansion on a Male. However it features quite a lot of Breast expansion as well.
Despite being noted as magical it's actually supernatural unexplained growth rather than related to magic. Also features chemical growth on Penis.
The growth is over 8 pages but is continues so depending on where you stop it's >any< of the amount of growth tags.
I hope this isn't too much of a waste of your time.
In addition this is:
Medium length male on Below average length female.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.00
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 1.00
- Technical: 1.00
Ghostly
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Haha, fellow drunkard. Yeah I was at least tipsy when writing this.
In truth I already mentioned penis expansion being the central theme in the download details. I'm sorry that you find my fetish weird; don't get me wrong; most fetishes are weird to outsiders even [BE] I'm sure you have met an 'ass' person 'no tit' before.
AS for posting it here; being anonymous on the internet makes it and easy step. xD
alcoholicGrammarian
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I decided to read this one to give you the benefit of the doubt but godsdamn. There is way more dick in this than there is tit. (Not to mention your various grammatical, spelling, and narrative issues.) As a lez, this is way out my paradigm.
It's cool if you wanna use writing to work out your weird hormonal feelings. I have done the same! Difference is, I did not then post it to a website which was available worldwide. (dont take this too seriously for real I am drunk as a coed on mardi gras. but do actually get help regarding your spelling/grammatical issues.)
OmniTrixie
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Your spellchecker can't think for you. It won't fix words based on what you meant to say. If you just click through your writing taking the first word it lists, you might wind up -- immortalized.
If every term was in the right place, this would have been somewhere below average with a cardboard (and unlikable) lead character. As is, you were about five random replacements and one swordfight away from The Eye Of Argon, Mostly PE Edition.
Read through it. Carefully.
MR E
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
hey i cant read it can you put it in another forum
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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