Thin as a rail, lonely, and unemployed, Chrissie finds herself in desperate need of work. When the owner of a dessert shop known for its excessively voluptuous clientele offers her a position though, Chrissie has to choose just how much she's willing to give up, and how much she's willing to gain to get the job. (I've been doing a lot of series lately, and I thought I'd have a go at doing a single story for a change. Especially since this is something a bit different for me, any feedback would most definitely be appreciated).
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.17
- Characters: 4.83
- Technical: 4.67
BigBEFan
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excellent story as always Kodos! Only request, make this one a series too..and have her at least 3 more of those ;-)
G-man001
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very fun. I appreciate a fat growth story since pregnant ones are a little scarce lately. Very well written. Would have loved to see some actual sex, especially at stages of her growth..but I'm just nitpicking. Great job. Love you one offs a lot.
Fat Chicks
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, fattening up just isn't my thing though and that is what you will find here. Also BE is rather brief.
kingdom409
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful, just like all your other stories! Can't wait for the next part!
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I wasn't expecting magic, honestly; I thought there was a montage in store for us, but it works either way. A nice condensed piece of fattening/breast expansion.
Nameman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
If I may, this story involves all the ingredients of success, mixed just right to make a very satisfying, clever, and sexy story. The contrast between the main character and Mara puts the plot very firmly into the realm of disbelief, setting the tone for the magical transformation at the end. While I am not used to stories in which fatness or skinniness of characters is described in such depth, I still love the BE in this story (it is absurd on a comprehensible scale). A very good read.
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