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The Overflowing Bra

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A story of a man who finds that fulfilling your wife's every wish can bite you in the ass.
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Just want bigger boobs on chicks
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Like Karma said, this is just TG. Seems like that's all we see anymore, and as perverted as I am I'm just not a fan. Decent enough writing, completely fucked plot though (unless you are in to that sort of thing.)

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

I liked it, but it felt a bit short. You could have slowed it down with descriptions of how it felt when his tits grew, busting out of his bras, the inner conflict when he became attracted to Ross's dick, etc.

Very Good Karma
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

This story is straight TG- which I'm fond of- but it's sort of tacky putting it up on OFB. Also, another depressing cuckold story about being humiliated and generally treated like shit by everyone. If that's not your thing, don't read this.

Writing's okay, though.

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