The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Use as Instructed/Adrenaline
Em finds out what happens when she doesn't use a breast cream as instructed. Sally, a fugitive hiding in a strip club, stumbles upon Em after her changes and finds out what happens to the women who use the breast cream. She, too, ends up feeling its effects first-hand.
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Conversely, the multi-boobs actually ARE my thing, but the mind control aspect took away from it for me. Very well written, though!

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Like ktc, multi-boobs isn't really my thing, but the story was great anyway. Thanks for sharing.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Multi-boobs isn't really my thing, but that did little to detract from its over all appeal and quality. An excellent read.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5


I don't even know where to begin. This is one of the finest stories I've ever read on this site. The attention to detail, the characterization, EVERYTHING.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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