Em finds out what happens when she doesn't use a breast cream as instructed. Sally, a fugitive hiding in a strip club, stumbles upon Em after her changes and finds out what happens to the women who use the breast cream. She, too, ends up feeling its effects first-hand.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 5.00
JV
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Conversely, the multi-boobs actually ARE my thing, but the mind control aspect took away from it for me. Very well written, though!
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Like ktc, multi-boobs isn't really my thing, but the story was great anyway. Thanks for sharing.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Multi-boobs isn't really my thing, but that did little to detract from its over all appeal and quality. An excellent read.
Baconman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow.
I don't even know where to begin. This is one of the finest stories I've ever read on this site. The attention to detail, the characterization, EVERYTHING.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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