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The Overflowing Bra

Vicky & Victoria, Part 4
Growing larger by the minute, Vicky begins to worry that Victoria is going to keep on filling her up until she's utterly at her mercy. Worse yet, Vicky discovers that being enormous is so much fun that she may not be able to bring herself to stop until it's too late.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

First off: You should read this series. Start at the beginning and you'll appreciate the end much more.

I have the feeling/hope that there will be a part 5 at some point. I've enjoyed this series immensely, mostly because it's got a combination of my favorite flavors of the genre: self-controlled, wow, lactation, multiple expanding characters, the list goes on.

The ONLY "problem" I've had is that I sometimes have trouble keeping up with the relative sizes of everything/one- it's really only after the aftermath of an expansion session do we get the damage report, a lot of the time, but really, the expansion scenes are engrossing and fun to the point that the actual numbers are almost meaningless.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

BBW isn't really my thing but I loved the writing, especially the Georgian period writing style.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I love all your work because of your great attention to detail describing the growth and the feelings of Vicky about her expansion. I especially like how she is conflicted about it, trying to restrain her desire to grow more. There were just a few typos I noticed near the beginning but nothing too distracting. Great work! I'm also a fan of WOW size growth and this is some of the best. It's so out of control and that's what makes it enjoyable.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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