The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Scene - Becoming a Milk Factory
Ariane is preparing for a possible evening out when her busty breasts begin expanding even bigger for no apparent reason.  This is a narrative light scene focused entirely on Ariane's extreme breast expansion.  A delightful romp about Ariane becoming little more than a human factory for making milk.  Enjoy!
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

Fun times!

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Great job! Your descriptions were very well thought out. Can't believe you forgot to include the belly/preg tag!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Your wonderful descriptive ability is displayed in this story. It feels like I'm in the room with Ariane, watching the growth! Personally, some sex would have been nice, too.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Pretty much as described. Enjoyable, but short.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really liked the idea behind the story. It was executed very well!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Over the top for me, but a fun read none the less

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