The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Xodin
masterxodin@yahoo.com
Scene - Becoming a Milk Factory
Ariane is preparing for a possible evening out when her busty breasts begin expanding even bigger for no apparent reason.  This is a narrative light scene focused entirely on Ariane's extreme breast expansion.  A delightful romp about Ariane becoming little more than a human factory for making milk.  Enjoy!
Average Scores:

DexSin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

Fun times!

G-man001
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Great job! Your descriptions were very well thought out. Can't believe you forgot to include the belly/preg tag!

Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Your wonderful descriptive ability is displayed in this story. It feels like I'm in the room with Ariane, watching the growth! Personally, some sex would have been nice, too.

deus
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Pretty much as described. Enjoyable, but short.

grimmy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really liked the idea behind the story. It was executed very well!

ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Over the top for me, but a fun read none the less

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