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The Overflowing Bra

The Light Fantastic
Lab Accident 2: Reproducible
Dealing with the aftermath of their transformations, one mutated researcher has a plan to help them fit in again. (WARNING: Extreme transformations!)
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Some of the best work I've seen on this site. I look forward to Part 3. PLEASE TELL ME there's gonna be a part 3!

Chaos Master
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Please keep up the excellent work. I can hardly wait to see what kind of transformations you think up next! Please keep writing in this universe.
Yours truly,

Chaos Master

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Lovely, simply lovely. Please keep writing! You are quickly becoming one of the authors that I get excited to see a new story from. As a side note....please continue to put your stories in the format as this one. As of right now I can't read one or two of your stories witht they format they are in as of rightn ow.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Stories like this are the reason you are one of my favorite authors on this site keep up the good work and would love to see more from this universe!(also a continuation of the cupids arrow and taken prisoner <3 )

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Love your stories Light Fantastic, also a big fan of your captions over at FP.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good stuff. would love to read more in this universe.

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