The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Lengthening
Mrs. Gagglecock has a slow day at the office where she relives her early days in the porn business and learns the true nature of length.  A truly sordid work.  
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Disjointed and extremely difficult to follow. Contains situations that don't seem to be intelligible, and words that are made up and aren't defined. Someone has read A Clockwork Orange too many times.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Same problem as ktc. It was likeable, but like your opera story, it became hard to follow as it went on.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very nicely done. So rare to get a good PE focused story

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I enjoyed it, just hard to follow again.

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