Mrs. Gagglecock has a slow day at the office where she relives her early days in the porn business and learns the true nature of length. A truly sordid work.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.75
- Technical: 3.50
Jobber
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Disjointed and extremely difficult to follow. Contains situations that don't seem to be intelligible, and words that are made up and aren't defined. Someone has read A Clockwork Orange too many times.
OM NOM NOM
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Same problem as ktc. It was likeable, but like your opera story, it became hard to follow as it went on.
FIller
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very nicely done. So rare to get a good PE focused story
ktc
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoyed it, just hard to follow again.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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