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The Overflowing Bra

Night at the Opera - Ghosting
Pretty plain Jane with this one.  Just a night at the opera gone swimmingly.  Mrs. Merriweather, polite woman in her late 30's, experiences an out of body experience with her soon to be husband, Mr. Merriweather, bro not even out of college.  The characterizations and language are fluid so be warned.   
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Not sure why you considered it plain Jane. It was a subject that is used fairly frequently (extra terrestrial) being able to manipulate the real world. If nothing else, it was just difficult to follow but I liked it enough. Many references I did not catch I'm sure, and your description of BE is fairly lacking, though its there and noticeable.

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