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Alice Amoeba: Parts One and Two
Two sequels to Big Big Blob with a tweaked version of the story included. Alice emerges from the lake, a changed woman, shows a nasty redneck a good time, and "patches" things up with Roy.
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Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The amoeba was like a praying mantis mating ritual. Now my next question is this this. When doing the act, who is the worst person to kill you in the process? The Woman from the first Species movie or Alice from this story?

Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Overall, pretty good. I didn't notice any flow breaking spelling or grammatical errors. The lack of any apparent BE was somewhat disappointing, so marks of for that. Lets see some BE in the next installment.

Errr, Eww
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

The story is well written, no glaring grammar issues etc, character development is good, but the story in general was a bit too much for my tastes.

No BE other than the mention that her tits are bigger now than they used to be, and frankly I'm not too sure being eaten alive by a blob of death is a concept that blends well with erotic literature. I enjoyed the 2nd part more than the first. Your descriptions of the "acts" are very well done, I just find the subject matter a bit too icky to enjoy it :/

Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Okay this was posted on a BE site so prepare for a few comments on the lack of any BE here. That being said I liked the first story that started this, mostly figuring that this would be at least part of the out come. Although what followed was strange humorous and decidedly crazy much like the old B movies which I think may have formed some of the basis of your idea, but for the next installment add in some BE just to keep the rest of the site happy.

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