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The Overflowing Bra

Daniel B.
Bra: A Saw Parody (Complete)
The Complete "Bra".  Awaking to find herself alone and chained in a warehouse, Jenna is forced to watch the counter clicking away her doom, her only company a mysterious video feed.

Elsewhere, bright and determined Eva is suffering her own nightmare. Her captor wants to play a game, and he's brought her friends along for the ride. She'll have one hour to find out who their captor is, what the game-master wants from them, and how it's all connected. If she can't, it's game over for all of them.

Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Whoever edits and pueibshls these articles really knows what they're doing.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved it, blew my mind at the end. thumbs up

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Just like the real "saw", the plot shocked me to the core.
Excellent writing, excellent story progression, even though I am not absolutely happy with the ending.
You are very talented at storytelling, and I'm eager to read more from you!
5 *****

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well written, great BE scenes, thoroughly enjoyed it. Hope to see more from ya!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

That was very well written. Despite it being so close to how the actual movie went, I still didn't expect that.

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