Drunk with desire, Vicky sets out make herself as big as she possibly can. With everything around her constantly filling her to even more luscious immensity however, she soon discovers that her problem doesn't lie in trying to get bigger, but in discovering a way to stop before she finds herself inflated beyond even her own insatiable capacity.
Also, this story turned out to be a bit longer than I had expected. If anyone thinks it would have been better to break it up into chapters, please do let me know in the feedback; I always appreciate it when people take the time to leave a response.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.89
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 4.78
biggerisbetter
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A fabulous piece of fantasy writing. I appreciate the details and the time you take to develop the story as well as the women. My only concern is my lack of imagination to properly see in my mind the immensity of the women you create.
xxxsylva
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Truly amazing, I don't think you should divide it up, I love the length it is now.
The Dragonborn
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Compared to the most of the utter twaddle posted over the last year, this is a shining beacon.
Diablos97
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I..I think I finished it. Took me several tries, but with so much process I could only get through sections at a time. Epic writing, Kodos! Thank you for this continuation!
Ravens-son
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Kodos, you are easily one of my favorite writers in this genre. Not just BE or on Overflowing Bra, but among any expansion or weight gain writers. I'm not even finished with this latest part, but I have to throw in my two cents.
Nonna Moose
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is my favorite series of all time. Thanks so much!
elvis returns
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good work. I wish everything here was this good.
Milom
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Don't apologize for length, ever. These days 9/10 stories are "Chapter 1" of a future 28 part epic that never comes. It's really great when someone puts out an actual finished work.
I also like reading your stuff because there are moments when I can tell you're stretching your writing muscles and trying stuff out. It's interesting to see you jump from milestone to milestone as a writer. Keep up the good work. You've never written a bad story and get better with each publication. Who knows, you might be the first dude to write the "Great American Breast Expansion Novel."
Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another amazing installment of an already epic tale Kodos. I just read some of your older works a few days back for nostalgia's sake and lo & behold; another new chapter. This one is quite good, enjoyable; despite being a tad lengthy. But that's what we've come to expect. You never fail to impress. 5s all around.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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