The Overflowing Bra

Writing was ok, but ever thing else failed rather hard.
The charthers where unrealistic and quite insane in their own ways. Very few of their actions made any sense.  There was no enjoyable BE or even warm feelings here.
The sex was bland and easy to skip as there was no point to it, and mostly seemed to be a very piss poor suck off fantasy. 

I read this front-to-back, and I guess this story what happens when someone masterbates to the Matrix, World of Warcraft, and maybe Daybreakers with elves sucking magic instead of blood from humans, then writes a story about it.
Yes, there is breast enlargement, about 20 pages in.  It's brief.
Quantity has a quality all its own, so that is what I say about the sex scenes and the women.

What really nailed home Alex's immaturity to me -- and the overall ridiculousness of his character -- was when he was taken on the tour of the mansion. In the bedroom, he wondered where the video games were. What the hell? The characters feel flat, forced, immature, and hysterical much of the time.

It's kinda funny people are commenting without reading the story. This part did have BE in it, but you'd have to read that to know it wouldn't you?
SPOILERS
I liked him falling for Kelly, I think that was a nice twist, but I don't like the way he kept trying to justify his actions. He has sex with anything that movies with a dick he knows to be additive and than feels remorse when he finds out the women he just enslaved have lives?  I did feel the wishing ring and fight with the guy that gave it was a little trite. And -yes- I do feel like a hypocrite with that observation. But, giving himself wolverine's claws and cyclops optic blasts? Com'on, you're a better writer than that. Every time anything happened with the wishing ring I cringed a little. He gives wishes to his slaves and they wish for larger breasts? Even though its clear they hate big breasts? Seems like a silly wish for them to make. He uses it to fight the guy that gave it? Seems like poor planning all around, yet it was -apparently- a good idea.
I felt this part was too contrived compared to the first which I found clever. Really, I am just being harsh with this review because you raised my standards with the first one. Overall the story is much better than others here. Anyway, I have to say I liked everything about the story except for the plot.

This is a very different story from the previous part. Much more mind control and other psychadelic stuff, which did not really make compelling reading for me. I am not too bothered about the lack of BE, but I would have liked more descriptions of the big boobs even without the expansion. Technical quality was good, but it was just not my thing. Sorry.

Couldn't really get into things, felt very "wordy" for a BE story. Also scanned for breast and read any surrounding paragraphs and couldn't find much if any BE. Similar to Elfworld 1, no BE. :(
When I read "gag gift" i expected breasts exploding out of dresses, growing at inopportune times, etc, but was letdown.

I am enjoying your style of writing very well and I was looking forward to a continuation of your first story however, the only thing I'm hung up on is your actual storytelling. Why is Alex so obsessed with the Kelly? Your first story made it quite clear that Alex had problems with earlier relationships because his girlfriends ended up being "Bitches." Why now is he struggling to maintain a relationship with Kelly who puts him down all the time when he has other girls almost worship him? I would understand having guilty feelings towards the way he "Enslaved" her body with both his magical penis and the scroll. Even in his dreams though she continues to insult him and push him away. So far I have enjoyed everything you have written but I can't get past this. Other than that it's a 4.5 story, it's not a 5 for my own reasons. Don't take it as an insult to your style or grammar just my own personal bias towards that interaction.