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The Overflowing Bra

STX - Part 3
We join Lieutenant Cassandra Gallo in this action packed sequel as she maneuvers her way through the ship's tight exhaust system on her mission to kill the Captain and regain control.  Will her military training be enough to overcome the pheremone laden environment and suppress her lusts?  What plans does the Captain have for the rest of the ship?  Comments are welcome.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very well-realized sci-fi smut. It has all the outrageous boobage that readers on this site could hope for, but in a developed, comprehensible universe. It has the intense, raging sexual hungers that I personally enjoy. Bravo!

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Yes, I plan on continuing this series and addressing the multiple male issue and the rival STX colony still present on the planet below. However, it may be a while, currently it is only in outline form. I have a couple other stories I would like to finish first. Thanks!

Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Please tell us you plan to continue this amazing series? I can FULLY agree with all the other comments to date on how cool and gripping the story is so far.

I am curious what will happen to any other MALE crew members in this universe, unless your answer is to make everyone bi which could be erotic but also seems like the easy way out. I personally feel both For & AGAINST that answer, if that makes any sense.

Thank you

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

First, thank you for sticking to just third person point of view instead of swapping between first and third.

Secondly (thirdly, etc), it's good to see some thought going into the actual story rather than moments that make my head ache trying to figure what the heck is going on between badly written sex scenes. I love the fact your characters don't just blindly accept all the changes, they stop and think about it.

Also, an absolutely humongous thank you for not turning your female characters into big titted bimbos. As a female reader that tendency in fiction (not just the BE subset) drives me insane.

Keep up the great work, I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. :)

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Outstanding. Both great sci fi and sex. Fantastic character with depth, plot with suspense, and action. Plus never lost its BE erotic element.

Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wow, that was fantastic and hit all the right buttons --- fantastic females, comprable male, realism, and reasonable explainations of what is going on.

In fact, it was good sci-fi, on top of the erotic factor. Reminded me of Firefly for reasons unknown.

Quibbles? Not many, if any.

If I was just going to pick something, the fighting robots were cool, but dragged --- but only because I was hurrying for the sex parts. If written in another context, spectacular!

* My nickname is, indeed, "Roid Abuser." Quickcorrect on an iPad is a useful thing, except when it is not.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great work as usual!

Can't wait for you to continue The Touch series.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

As ever, a perfect mix of good characters and ridiculous bodies.

Love it.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I think I see that you wrote the story and I'm still not prepared for how good its going to be.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really respect your focus on story driven expansion, and the sex scenes are fantastic. There's a definite tension up to the climax, and what a climax it is! Great work, love the series, and please please please write a 4th!

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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