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Marvin hated Christmas.. especially since he worked at the mall. Little did he know what could happen when he was not only faced with having to stand-in for the Mall Santa on Christmas Eve, but also be confronted with the secret crush from his flat-chested co-worker, Mindy. It looks like a recipe for disaster.. but maybe.. just maybe.. the magic of Christmas will save the day.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.73
- BE: 4.53
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 4.67
BB47
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Glad most of you liked it. I'll see what I can do about finishing the other stories... I'm strongly lacking in both time and solitude. As always, thanks for the reviews, they help make me a better writer.
Orison
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
It kind of mellowed out for me quickly. There were few if any surprises. Typos on the first page, how do those get missed?
Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I am in complete agreement with ALL the other comments. I as well would like to see STX part 3 come out soon, the storyline was great and I think unique as far as I know.
Keep up the great work, I always look at ANY story you have written, they are THAT good
Chaos Master
Xero
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the best stories I ever read!
Frenchy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
As always a good story with incredible sex scenes. But I wonder, will we have the pleisure to read part 3 of STX soon, I can't get this story out of my mind.
Thanks for this Xmas story.
maguffle
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another wonderful story! I have loved all of your work. It's safe to say that you're my favorite BE author. Keep up the good work (and add more chapters to you other stories)
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I enjoyed this very much.
I echo the comments on the mutuality and likeability of the characters; in too many stories, the female characters are little more than a hit sperm destination.
It's also had me wondering if there is such a thing as a Santa fetish. I may go to Halloween as Santa next yet, just to find out.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Bravo! Thanks for the superb story.
Russian Judge
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A lot of BE stories show contempt for women. This one, God bless you, doesn't. It's great to have a nice, funny story for Christmas where the people actually care for each other. The only problem (a minor one) is that the last page of your PDF could be deleted; it's blank.
Fahzbehn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A small masterpiece of BE erotica: nothing jarring, every surprise a pleasant one. The part where she admitted she liked him seemed a little forced, but all and all a smooth, sweet story, just in time for Christmas.
deus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful. Well-written. A bit silly, but a nice change. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I loved your previous works, and this is no exception. You have humor, your characters feel almost real, and finally a story without the nc tag. Please continue writing like you have been, I have nothing more to say.
Dukat
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Actual writing talent, and good smut to boot! It's a Christmas miracle!
Matt
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very well written! I was surprised to be liking both Marvin and Mindy, there little adventure with his job, and their interactions. Then, the sex was great to read! The description from not only their reactions, but dimensions and the growth? Great. I really enjoyed reading this. My only critique was the "I'm in love with you!" bit, but I can look past that.
Wolf
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely superb, very well written, good story flow. All in all a fantastic story!
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