Smutty and dark. This tells the story of a hopeless nerd finding his perfect lover in the most unlikely of people.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 4.33
BD
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoyed the story, although there they story could have been a little longer giving a little more detail in to the actual BE
fwip
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
My comments are about the same as ktc's - I read mainly so I could rate accurately.
KTC - I'm pretty sure that the "nc" tag stands for non-consensual. Unless you meant the gender-swap bit, which the "tg" tag is for.
ktc
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A turn in the wrong direction for me. TG has always been pretty weird for me, but then she started getting blue skin and no hair and.... yeah. While certainly not as bad as TheDarkTrianni's rape fest story he recently posted my stance is the same in this case. X basically rapes T and he/she is basically forced in to submission and being "happy" via nano bots. If you must write such stories I do think there's a better place for them than here. Subject matter aside, your writing quality is fine and its certainly not as bad as it could be. If I'm going to take a side for or against it though, you can't just be "kind of" against stories like these. What would help the most is definitely a tag so I could just not read them altogether, and then we are both happy.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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