The Overflowing Bra

I don't know why people are making a big deal out of this story. I really like it and no, I am not a paedophile. I'm just saying the story is really good. Can you please make more of this story?

This was actually so bad that it was good. As in, it's so terrible, I was laughing out loud at parts. At least up until the 12 year olds woke up and started doin' their thing. Then it was just creepy. Seriously, is this even legal? Isn't it, like, child porn?

I like it do a sequel :) Lolita Nobokov

One could find "magical" ways around pornography on this site. I won't go into children, but suffice to say, much that goes on here is the denegration of the female body. Corruption being the prime motivation of most of these stories. The corruption of female authority figures, innocence, or just one's place within society. So, we're not all perfect. The abhorent thing about pedophilia is the attack upon a child's understanding of the world, through the destruction of her innocence. This has long lasting effects on one mental state. Suffice to say, if you want to utilize a child "like" body in a story, have an adult female age backwards. Stating that her mind is still adult. You can then warp her little body any which way you like.

these are kids, change the ages and maybe I'd download it. maybe older stories have underage characters, but maybe this porn community has become more civilized then that.

Next Chapter por favor!

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Remove this story or I'm bringing it to the attention of the FBI. You can enjoy rotting in Prison for 10 years, I heard people like that are real popular there.
If anyone else feels the same way, call the FBI Field office at:
(215) 418-4000

Make the Charakter older than mabye someone would read this .... from me 0%/100%

First of all, using children in a erotic story is just wrong. Second, you can't have a lab 200 miles underground.. the top layer of the earth is only 80km. (55 miles or sth)

The title alone is very... no.
Not the type to just rate without actually reading, but... really? A twelve year-old? I dunno about some of you, but I don't want to read an erotic story and get wound up about a twelve year-old. Sorry, but maybe this wasn't the right place for this kind of deal.

this is a place of erotic fiction people.  and like someone previously mention, many be based stories feature younger than normal characters.  as for the author.  I this i first say this posted on 99chan. and also on some other story forum and it was well recieved on either.  I for on would like to see further chapters.  little complaint:  MORE BE!

Though this is not the appropriate venue for such stories, many people do like them.  This just isn't the place-- in appropriate venues, your idea would be welcomed.

Based on the title alone, I'm sure that downloading or possessing this story would be illegal where I live. So I'm not going to do either, and I really hope the site admin deletes it off their server.
Whether you agree with the law or not, remember that you can still get sent to prison for breaking it.

I didn't download this based on the title alone.
Please delete.

GET THIS OUT OF HERE!

I recommend a deletion of this story, few people being charged with child porn cases that rival murder trials as of late. I'd rather not have this site go away because of a bad streak of stories that call attention to the site.

Really struggled to read this. Some elements seemed very random and in depth. The grammatical errors in places, the language...lacking in a lot of actual growth.

I can understand that people get uptight about anything involving sex and kids.  But this is just somebody's story--no actual people are harmed by whatever he fantasizes.  So getting your balls in a twist seems like a waste of time.  Besides, some perfectly good, even classic, BE stories have involved underage protagonists (e.g. "Something in the Water"), so I don't see the reason to get all Puritanical now.
That having been said, I found this story to be technically not so great, and light on actual BE.  It's by no means the worst one that I've seen here lately, but it has more the feeling of someone's fantasy put down on paper than a well-written work of fiction.  It also falls into the trap of substituting sizes (e.g. bra sizes) for proper description.

I gave it a 2 for technical quality. It has sentences. Sucky sentences but real ones. We've had some that didn't manage to have them.

This site has a forum where you can get input on writing style and content.

why aren't these stories moderated?????????????????

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20 inch cocks and huge balls on 12 year olds is not perfection. Using 'and' 3-4 times per sentence is not good writing. Pornography, written or otherwise, should not include children.
"Second off last time I did something like this by making characters older I got told off..." <---- What? 

The title turns me astray from this so badly I don't even want to give it a chance.

This is wrong on so many levels.  It should be taken down.
we should include zero and negative numbers in the rating categories

Yeah this needs to go. I read very little of it and still feel like I need to sit in the shower for two days straight. Last thing we need is for this site to get shut down!

Just bad.

This is the most blatant and pathetic attention grab I've ever seen.

I agree with Jay and Xero. We shouldn't let this site become a haven for paedophiles.

First off I didn't say that they had sex...
Second off last time I did something like this by making characters older I got told off...
Finally I'm still trying to figure what the limits of this place is... If you guys don't like it take it down... I realy don't care...

Jay has a point. This is definetly on the realms of child porn.

"Setsuko is 12 years old while Seiko was 5 years old, both were intelligent and beautiful but severely lacking in the breast and butt department."
I'm no doctor (or scientist, like our clueless protagonist), but maybe they're 'severely lacking in the breast and butt department' because they're f*cking children?  
You hesitated for a reason.  Use your head next time.