The Overflowing Bra

Very nice app. BUT when my son (3.5 years) play it on my iphone his litlte hand always touch either the eraser or the arrow sign at the bottom since his finger is short. So the page always change and he could not write.. I think it will be better to move the arrow and eraser to top of screen.

Overall, a really nice story. Characters do lack depth, but introducing about 10 in the space of 32 pages, it's bound to happen. BE isn't huge(nothing wrong with realism), and is mostly offscreen (some on). The writing flows well enough for me to read it without really noticing.

BE:
This is probably the biggest weakness of the story. And not just the BE, but the ass growth, too. (I didn't even realize that any butt-expansion had occurred until the last few pages) 
The sexiness of the story comes from the constant sex, descriptions of hard nipples, sex, wet t-shirts, being splattered with cum, ravenous sex, bj's, and other things, NOT the expansion. It's almost like an afterthought. You do realize this is a BE site, yeah?
Characters:
I'm have mixed feelings on this, so I'm putting down a three. On the one hand, I kind of like the concepts of (some) of the characters... but you just casually keep moving onto the next as though they don't really matter to the story, and so we're left with only bits and pieces, and characters just show up whenever they feel like it. (I lost track of who the girlfriend was by the time the main character mentioned his week was up) This may be more of a fault of trying to fit so many people into 34 pages - try cutting down the number of characters and just have more recurring ones. Also, as another suggested, PLEASE embed the images if you're going to go through the trouble of providing some! This would have helped A LOT with keeping up with the huge mess of characters you've got here.
Grammar:
There's some grievous mis-usage of the word "whimper" at times of the story, which gave me the wrong idea on a few occasions. Grammar itself was otherwise okay, just that bit that bothered me.
Overall:
When I was thinking about the characters it also occurred to me that it felt like you were distracted by something while writing the story, like parts were written while having a conversation with someone, or in between bits of a movie. From a literary standpoint, the ending was very weak, even though it was quite hot, which brings me back to the character issues. (Who is this chick? What relevance does she have to the plot? Why not just end it with that girl he was texting on the phone? Have that girl take a bunch of pills instead of the girl in the ending! Fuck, anything but this weird cop-out) 
Despite all the issues though, this was actually pretty good! It's not great as strictly BE-fetish material, but it's still a fun read.

Wow, that was hot.  Excellent work.  The only thing that prevented me from giving you all 5s was that because of the short descriptions and the number of girls, it was hard to keep them straight in my mind.

VERY pleased to see a story about trying to resist sex and orgasm. And being overcome by horniness.  THANKS!

As a "button pusher", this was a good time. Looking forward to the next chapter.
As far as plot, character and overall writing style go, it's not up to the standard set by "Jazz". Still, I appreciate that sometimes you just have to get the thing out and move on. I hope that you'll continue the tale and after a while come back with a rewrite to fix the issues of technique, plot and characters. :--]

could use more descriptiveness in the girls and breast but in the over all great story cant wait for another one 

I enjoyed this story overall, but I didn't find the characters very likable.  I much preferred the last story that you did ("Jazz") and hope that you'll continue that one before you do more work on this storyline.  I was also a little surprised that the pictures weren't just embedded into the Word document; that would make them easier to reference during the story at the proper points.

The casual hatred of women in the story is so pungent it leaps off the page and attacks the central nervous system.  One wonders if the author has brilliantly captured the mindset of a certain kind of person, or if he IS that person.  Remarkable!

Do you plan to write any more chapters to this story?
You should work on a more understandable plotline though, like will the horny feelings grow, level out, or shrink over time. If you DO decide to write more, try to use a plausible plot, try and let the reader know which character is speaking are the main issues to solve IMHO.
Pretty good overall though.

Where did you get these pictures?

who is the girl in picture #6? Marissa?

Damn hot.