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A failed science experiment holds bizarre and erotic consequences for a small team of researchers. (WARNING: Extreme transformations!)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.25
- Technical: 4.25
I_Think
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very nice descriptions and interesting transformations. I do note that this IS a site where people mainly expect BE; however, personally I enjoy stories with such transformations more :)
Excellent use of proper English!
Jason G
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Good grammar and spelling but the whole thing felt rushed and I found it hard to keep track of all the changes and who they were happening to. Otherwise a great concept, and some of the descriptions were great, esp the one about knotted muscles relaxing.
Bahamad
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
TLF, I love your stuff.
I do wish this piece had a bit more content, be it character depth, introduction/buildup, or extended climax. While I can appreciate a poke at the stereotype of the lab accident and cutting directly to the chase, your previous work (notably Hoferatu, which I would love to see more of) felt more thought-out and complete.
Finly
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A fun story, I would love read more. I quite like rampant transformations
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