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The Overflowing Bra

pakled
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The Ironclads of Yari
Hokay, been a long time with nothing of mine to show here. Following is another attempt at Erotic Steampunk, actually Oriental this time. This is the 5th part of the Sarissan trilogy, so it's a little heavy on story. Once again, do a search on ~, and you can skip the romance, plot development, bad puns, borrowed dialog, and get right to the 'good parts'. You don't have to read the other stories to follow this, unless you want all the references...

It's a bit long (hey, be glad I didn't include the book cover piece), but hopefully some fun. 
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