The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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The Big Blonde, The Big Schlong, and The Great Pinkie Invasion
A big blond, a big cock, and pink aliens on parade.
Average Scores:

Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

AWESOME

Muhznit
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Well since Max didn't say it enough: "What the fuck?!"

But that's what one gets when they don't keep in mind that they're reading something from the "weird" category. The last thing I read that was this crazy was probably "Boobleck" on mcstories, but unlike Boobleck, this piece definitely has originality and a lulzy feel to it that would be even more hilarious if it rhymed throughout.

A few parts were a bit squicky for me, but given the general feel of the story, I doubt it was meant for actual fap material, so I'll decide to look past that.

deus
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

It's...weird.

Daiyuki
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Lulz. That is all.

Baconman
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is probably my most favorite story on this site in a good, long time. I love absurdist situations and unabashed cheesy comedy in my smut, and... well, I've got a thing for big ol' ladybits, too.

Weird, wonderful, funny as hell.

PyroWildcat
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 5

This story seems to straddle the line between simply over-the-top and flat-out parody, especially considering the rather flat characters.

Not to say it was bad, of course. Between the interesting ideas and hilarious dialog, it was pretty amusing and a fun read.

Roid Abuser
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 5

Well writen for its style. Bit over the top.

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