The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Silenteye
sonicer2@lycos.com
Blue Balls
A story based on the X-Men movie... the movie not the cartoon series. This is a experimental story like the Simpson one to see how well it would be recieved... I hope that this will be recieved well. Anyway... Summary: When Mystique finds that she is regaining her powers however she only gets some of her powers back wanting all her powers she sneaks into a lab to retrieve the mutant regenerator… or does she?
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Johnny
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I hope that you will continue this series it was a lot of fun to read.

Silenteye
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Thank you for the kind words

Gojira
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

A bit choppy but the size she grew to was fun!

Silenteye
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

And what does that mean exactly there is BE it's just not the primary focus of the story...

Yossarian
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Doesn't this stuff belong on slash fic sites?

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