The Overflowing Bra

wtf just happened besides what i could read wtf it makes sense like everyone else wtfh

I have to admit I read Vilerat's revised version of this first but decided I should give the original a try and was pleasantly surprised. 
Great story. Great BE. I think your descriptiveness of the growth, lactation, clothes issues was very well done. 
I agree with other posts that it would have been nice to have the reason why he's not seeking any medical help dealt with. Also with all that is happening to his chest it would be logical to see and I would have enjoyed seeing some general feminizing of the rest of his body, which could have been done without actually TGing him. 
The scene with Mindy the neighbor was a little 'wtf?': liked the scene but it seemed to have been just dropped into the story. She shows up, goes after him for no apparent reason, and is never heard from again. Would have liked more character development and motivation/interaction there instead of just the sex scene. 
My computer using word displayed everything that was supposed to be in italics with the actual tags, ie: strangling. Was kinda annoying. Other than that was very easy to read and well formatted.
Good job overall though! Would like to see more and/or a revised version of this one.

It was great, I hope you write more!

It was a good story, I enjoyed reading it and the situation of a man developing breasts without any other secondary sexual characteristics is really uncommon. I do wish that you had included perhaps some more detail as to how he felt. Also as it went on it became more disjointed with each event not naturally flowing to the next. 
It was good though, and I did check out your deviantart, keep it up, and keep on this subject matter, it's a rare one.

Interesting. Hmmm. It's a little TG for my taste. Could have been a neice instead of a nephew. Loved the interaction with the aunt but the next door neighbor was a little random.

This is a transgender story.

This was well written, descriptions were excellent, but I had a few issues.
Possible spoilers.
Why him? Why couldn't she do it to herself? What was the deal with the girl next door? She just suddenly appeared out of nowhere and no explanation given about her pouncing him. 

My biggest peeve was that he wouldn't go to a doctor... I don't get it, I really don't. I asked some of my male friends "If something freaky started to happen with your body that was embarrassing when you were in your late teens, would you go to a doctor?" They all said they would eventually.
Normally I don't care about such things, but when a story is well written and some thought put into it, I'd like to see the plot holes (to me), get plugged.

I actually enjoyed this one! Nice descriptions and ideas. Not a big fan of lac, but still, a fun read.