belle0887-stx@yahoo.com
Honestly, I really appreciate the feedback on Part 1! Thank you especially to those of you who don't normally comment. Hopefully, this next part is as enjoyable for you to read as it was for me to write. Suggestions are very welcome and helpful as I work on the next part.
For those of you just coming on board, join us as we follow the story of Captain Rivers and his exposure to a very pervasive life form during his deep space mission.
Part 3 should be ready in a couple weeks.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.22
- Characters: 4.44
- Technical: 4.67
Be-fr
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Did really enjoy this story. Can't wait for what's.coming next. What changes will the xenomorph cause? What will happen with the marines? Where will it end?
Will we soonhave the pleasure to read the next chapter
Professor Grow
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I am really enjoying this story. Please come back to it!
Maguffle
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I just finished part 1 and 2 of STX. All I can say is that this is a SEXTRAVAGANZA!!! This story is definitely more sex focused than "the Touch". However, I think that is just a testament to your writing skill and versatility. I'm very interested in seeing the parasties end-game and how this security chief will play into the story. I just discovered you today and I devoured all four of your stories. I look forward to reading more of you work.
BB47
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Less sex, more story. Got it.
Mr. Justaguy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Another great chapter in the story. It might be nice if later chapters had a little more story and a little less explicit sex scenes. I'm certainly not complaining but it would be fun to see more variety of situations.
P.S. Please do keep writing!
Roid Abuser
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very nice, indeed. +1 on the comments re: the security officer
MadMacs2010
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I like your style, it's an intoxicating rhythm that carries the reader along. I have marked the BE down because, well basically that's my thing and I would have liked a bit more descriptive into the actual process of feeling them expand, how she felt when it happened how it felt to her, yada yada. Also I notched the technical as there were a few mistakes that a little more thorough proof-read would probably pick up, but hey, I'm a perfectionist I guess. Other than that I am loving this story and I cannot wait to find out what transformations are in store, and to find out how big and full her boobs are going to get, will they be able to reign in their extasy before she immobilizes herself? Can't wait, keep up the good work.
M
Jared
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Davion
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Again an excellent continuation to the story. And yet again I'm drawn to actually rate it as such! Wonderful work - Please, do keep it up!
Tdean
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Cannot wait to see how the Chief of Security will be affected by the parasite.What is the parasite's end goal anyway? Will the entire crew be swept up in overwhelming lust? Tune in next time to find out!! :)
Frenchy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good story with enjoying intercourse and a good global plot
Collector
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Anony-mouse
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
THIS IS SO GOOD. Some description of her ass as it grows in his hands would be cool. FUCK MAN.
Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Dr. Light
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Truly awesome story. Please continue!
Rod
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very Good. Keep it up, can't wait for more
Xero
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Once again, I love this story! Made me wish that it happened in real life.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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