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With Tom's confession comes the opportunity for Caroline to release all her inhibitions and embrace a freedom of sexuality she's never known.
This is the final chapter in Teenage Dreams. Many thanks to everyone that helped steer the story and drive it to its conclusion. Read the instructions at the end on how to vote for the next story arc.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.53
- BE: 4.73
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.27
Bro
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very nicely made but rather short. Why is there no part 4?
Reginald Q. Bumquist
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved it. Everything I wanted in a BE story and not super long either.
ThatGuy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
I really liked it. I've read alot of these storys and this on had what i was looking for. I vote for wizard school. I would definatly like to see some more reality changes and the such. Maybe change the personality of the person being changed. Can't lie, I like the girls to end up dumb and horny.
PHAROID K
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
VERY GOOD!
i vote for... WIZARD SCHOOL!!!
with Breast/Butt Expansion AND TG brought on by potions and spells...
Crash
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Pregnancy please, and wizard fantasy.
Matt
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm agreeing with Exorban's suggestion, but also include belly growth!
Exorban
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like the Medieval High Fantasy, personally. Suggestions:
-Have a dragon capture a young princess/common gal and fulfill her wishes in his treasure-filled lair. Her wishes? BE, ofc, ass expansion, bimbo/"princess" beauty, gluttony (all goes to the good area), lust.
-A young knight (male) challenges a beautiful sorceress to battle. The sorceress simply paralyses him and gives him a choice; serve her or die. The knight reluctantly agrees to serve her. Then she perfoms BE and Ass Expansion upon herself, gorges on food and drink, and transforms the knight as to make in more muscular and more well-endowed.
Just some ideas. Cheers.
Beetlebomb
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful Story.
My suggestion: Wizard School for sure!
SilentReader
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Do some sort of wizard school but create your own characters. I find it awkward reading about characters I already know and love doing things out of their established character. But using a pre-existing setting with rules already established is fine.
Or the Modern Day Gothic Supernaturals thingy.
Erazor
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Modern Day Gothic Supernaturals
or
Medieval High Fantasy
some MPG would be great
Xanadu
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Still some of the best.
Future, multiple
afstarli
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Modern Day Gothic Supernaturals
MPG
would love to see some unintentional changes
Anony-mouse
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
You've definitely improved, loved it, especially the voting. I also like future, and the idea of it still being on earth. I'd love some preg as well.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great ending. You're writing improved a bit, I think.
As for the next story, I think you should continue Karen's Prescription.
But if not, then Future Space Explorers/Colonists with GTS thrown in would make an interesting tale.
Russian Judge
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
The story worked beautifully. The most important part; neither one was ABUSING each other. Too many stories in BEA show how much hatred and envy men have of women; here these two love each other and trust each other. As for your next story: I'd like to see something science-fictionish, but set here on relatively contemporary Earth, and I'd like to see accidental, unpreventable, but ultimately acceptable public nudity involved in it. (Yes, I love the Naked in School stories and how well they all work out.)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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