Realizing how ample the opportunities in front of her are, Chloe can't help but overindulge. Soon however, she finds out that a wish fulfilled can become a wish overfilled.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.75
bill4
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Loved it. Hope to see more.
Settler
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It is always nice to read your storys! Please more like these!
BigD88
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic. All of your stories are my absolute favorite recently. The best to come around in a long time. Keep it up!
Gman001
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Superb. the growth descriptions were detailed, exciting and very great prose. keep it up!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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