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The Overflowing Bra

Blake Isaac Gordon
Confetti Spaghetti Serengeti
~ is a brief story about two women fighting over the affection of one man during a lavish Halloween Party. The fun begins when the inflatable costume activates... (Please NOTE: This is more an inflation story emphasizing on growth than on breasts). I wrote this for the “Prose that Blows 3- Halloween Contest” Sadly, I couldn’t write a story under 750 words… hurts too much).
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