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The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil's Nymph(a)maniacs Parts5-6 (Illustrated!)
   For daring to explore the mysteries of the Nympha, I risk a maddening existence of ejaculating sperm-slavery. My only hope is a bra-busting weapon that will turn their own sexuality against them. With my life, sanity, and sperm on the line I shall attempt to rescue an ally who has unlocked the secrets of the aliens. But who will save me from my own lusts?
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Gotta say, I like these cliffhanger endings. Really anxious to find out what happens next!

A fan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

As usual, liking your stuff. Awaiting more of this fun little story indeed!

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

The story was good as usual. I'm looking forward to the next part(s). These chapters seemed to have more typos than usual, though.

Roid Abuser
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Continues to be great. Like how he is changing, becoming more masculine. Tend to imagine myself as the character. Being a life-support system for multiple penises is not a fate I would enjoy. His assistant appears to me to be an alien. Just a hunch. . . .

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