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The Overflowing Bra

XXXecil's Nymph(a)maniacs Parts1-4 (Illustrated!)
    The first four chapters of a sprawling, sex-drenched epic. I have sacrificed everything for my covert war against an insidious alien menace infiltrating society and bedrooms across continents. I dare not be swayed by glistening curves and expanding, milky breasts. Worst of all, as my dick grows vastly more potent, I can foresee the same fate for myself as those that surrender to the multi-orgasmic lures of never-ending alien orgy sex.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Do yourself a favor and read this story! This puppy rocks! XXXecil is a fantastic writer in this genre and you will find yourself loving this ride! I don't think any of the readers of BE could resist these ladies for a half a second. Great start.. and it only gets better!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of the best writers.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I love the way that you effectively convey the temptation that Cecil feels when fighting the Nympha. Another great story!

Little liar, ah ;)
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Hm, that's ok. ^^
But next time, don't say it's "(Illustrated!)", when actually it is NOT!... Seriously, a single little picture of cover, it's NOT an illustrated story...Or, if it was the case, every book are illustrated, as near 90% of book have an image on the cover...
I tell this because illustrated story are really rare, so when someone get a story with "(Illustrated!)" writing on the title, it's like "wa, cool! Let's see!", and then the lie, there is one picture and that's all...
So the guy is, at least disappointed, annoyed at worst... So if it's NOT illustrated, don't say it is, it will not serve you... ;)

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Good work as usual. This story reminds me a lot of the Bodyshifter's Universe stories, but I like your take on it. I can't wait for the next parts, hopefully with more action!

Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I enjoyed this very much. Completely different vibe than the usual stuff.

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