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The complete epic! (Illustrated) The first two chapters plus the final, third installment! At last the secret is revealed; who really stole Lisa's human dildo spell? What schemes will be hatched by those already enchanted by her sexual sorcery? Nerds will get laid, Fae will breed, humans will descend into nymphomania, with a stadium full of lusty, busty victims of libido-magic gone wild! (Illustrated!!!!!)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 4.25
pillager
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice picture.
Very arousing story.
I love the evolution of the setting. Any further stories would be appreciated.
Fan
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I've been a long time fan and its certainly good to see you writing more again. However I just didn't feel that old feeling with this series. It seemed to skip around too much and not tie the lose ends together. However your basic concept and writing style are still sound and I hope to read more from you in the future!
cman
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
I've been reading your stuff for years, and although I really enjoy the settings you've created and the ideas you've come up with for your stories, I can't help but feel like every time the story gets to an interesting part (a "climax", if you will), you switch focuses. Despite the fact that your characters are super-sexed, there's a surprising lack of sex in your stories.
It seems like tons of people enjoy your stuff a lot, so maybe I'm just one-off, but consider all of the scenes you set up and right as they start to have sex, you ****************** and suddenly introduce new characters.
Hardass
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
One picture doeth not an illustrated story make!
GJ, keep it up, came like 3.5x
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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