The Overflowing Bra

A little vague on how the pyramids got into so many houses. And I'm curious about what happens after? Do the fantasy people just stick around forever? Is there some price to pay? Overall, an exciting read.

There were a few small typos, but overall very good technically.  The characters could use a little more description, but not too much.  Overall, I quite liked it and can't wait for the next part!

Thanks all. Yeah, it did get repetitive; the constraints I set on myself (boob descriptions not involving fruits, bra sizes, or sports equipment..;) do tend to limit it.
The thing is sort of a 'Roshamon' style; trying to tailor the descriptions, reactions, etc., to each person's age and temprament. It was a bit of excess from the 'Sarissa' series, I meant to include some dragons, but never got around to it...;)
Still, I probably should have polished it a bit more, the descriptions are the hardest part. Thanks again, appreciate all comments, negative or positive, as long as they're constructive...

Good stuff. I like it more than many of your others, because it's grounded in the real world. But that's just my taste.

Not a bad story but I felt they were clones, not family members.

The introduction and conclusion were nicely done.  The character/setting of the story felt like it was placed nicely with the podium approach and address of the assembly.
I thought the pacing was good for each scene, and certain parts of each character definitely added definition to them (the response to aging, comparison to outside people are notable examples).  
It did feel like things were fairly episodic as each scene transitioned.  I think further interaction/reactions to the environment such as hearing other character's reactions to the goings-on throughout the rest of the story would have added more depth to the setting as the intro and conclusion did.

I enjoyed this story, it was a bit repetitive but i liked it all the same good job!