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The Overflowing Bra

High Priest of Dagon
Bride of Nyarlathotep
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 Natas
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
The Lovecraftian atmosphere is nice, but it really ends too soon.  A solid four star story.  Hope that there is more to it, the birth would make it a five.  You are off to a great start.
 pillager
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Nice work.
I hope a beach trip to Innsmouth is in the future...
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