pakled05@hotmail.com
Sigh, another story that ran away with the plot instead of fappage..;) Ok, there is some BE in here, but it's a bit more slow-paced, and subtle, so be forewarned.Was responding to a thread in another forum called 'Steampunk Erotica', so I thought...why not? Usually ~ stuff for those with more on their hands than time...;)
Sarissa 3, the 3rd part of the 2-part series is done as far as the story is done, just have to shoehorn in the BE scenes. Has to be done by next week. See you...out there...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 3.25
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.75
Andalya
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
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Oh-Sai
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Sir, your prodigious production rivals the bountiful bosoms of your characters. The stimulating storyline, amorous acts of scintillating sex, and bountiful breast expansion has made you a writer with few peers. Now if I could only keep up this exuberant exhortation of your wonderful writings without becoming ridiculously redundant... :)
Simply put, well done! I don't think I've seen someone product so much and of such high quality since Peter North.. err.. but you get the idea. :)
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent. As much as hate to lose you, you really should stop writing cheap wank stories for us perverts and start selling stories on the legit market. With minimal tweaking, this story could be a straight fantasy/sci-fi story. I enjoyed very much the Victorian period feel of this. I love male penis growth (and muscle growth, BTW if you do requests -- Arnold did an interview about how a swollen muscle feels very much like a erect penis, and he is correct) as an adjunct to breast expansion.
pakled
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
sorry, that's USUAL ~...my bad. have fun.
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