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The Overflowing Bra

How to BE a Better Hostess
A quick little scene about a bartender who learns to be a more gracious hostess.
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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Heliumgirl, it's a bartender trick for taking shots with customers without getting sloshed. You spit your shot into the beer bottle.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

A nice, cute story. Like some urban legend among bartenders. The last paragraph is a hoot! Well done, keep up the good work.

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

How does an immediate beer chaser after a shot become spitting the shot out?

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