pakled05@hotmail.com
Long time, no post. This is actually a 'failure'; I'd tried to write an 'evil' story, where the 'bad guys' win, but it seems I can't do evil...;)
Still, it's another in the Master PC stable of 'what ifs?'
Apologies for grammar and punctuation, I had the @#$ file on how not to make mistakes, but I can't find it..;)
Have fun.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.60
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 4.60
- Technical: 4.60
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Holy taco! One of the best MasterPC stories ever. I am WAY into mutual growth like this; too many male writers leave off the male growth to go with the female foxiness. I mean, who would want to be flabby man nailing the perfect women, when they could be a muscle stud nailign the perfect woman?
Muhznit
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A fun story to read. But one little bit of nitpicking: The protagonist makes the comment "____'s BROTHER?!" When it should be "____'s SISTER?!"
G-man001
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Definitely one of your best. Tough to top Right Sized and the
"with the Hands" stories. Loved the ending. Really felt the characters. Nice work...even had just a hint of MC.
anonymous ;)
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Realy great story, especially the secound half
R.U. Sirius
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
One of the best stories I've seen here in a long time. Wish it could have been a little longer, but I guess you've got to stop somewhere.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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