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When a dumpy officewoman insults one of her company's new hires, she gets a lot more than she bargained for in return.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.53
- BE: 4.53
- Characters: 4.47
- Technical: 4.13
Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Gaurav
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Glad I've finally found soihetmng I agree with!
Viddaric
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very well done, if I do say so myself. It was lacking somewhat in actual BE, but the story itself was dynamite. Loved the detail you put into the characters physical descriptions and transformations
XXXecil
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
That was extremely enjoyable! Length made it easy to read, and I relish transformations of prudish women into hyper sexual nympho-sluts!
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked the story, I just wish it was a little longer after her transformation.
Jumpin Jack
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really like the dirty talking pink haired chick. The whole story is great!
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Definitely worth a read because of the transformation, which is why I gave it a 5 overall; the TF is very well done and contains some intriguing elements (lips matching hair color was a nice touch). I would have actually liked to have seen a bit more about Sally's new life than just the "two months later..." scene, or at least to know more about the nymph mythology (Unnamed Pink-Haired Nymph must be possessed of some powerful magic if she can transform humans into nymphs -- what else can she do, and did any of that get transferred to Sally?).
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked it it hit my buttons too! Keep up the good work.
Captain Nice
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very great, I love the progression of the main character
Yossarian
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Very weird, very hot. Like how fast it moved.
joce37
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Enjoyed this a lot. Just the right length and sufficient detail to grab my attention right to the end. Many thanks.
savagecabbage
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
More character development! Great story, lots of descriptions, but then it's all over. Too fast! Give it space, there's lots more you could do with it.
elvis interuptus
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
connoisseur
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very great story. It is definetly worth reading.
godofwar5000
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Great story! Some spelling errors and the fact that a lot of the paragraphs are like a page long makes it hard to keep your place. But other than that, keep it up
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