Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.20
tljlf2000
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Wow... even thinking in the second part!!!!
brianm
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another excellent story, and I look forward to seeing where you will take it next!
outro
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
i think its a great story regardless of what its based on...I normally love your stories based on the realism of them via implants, but still a great read even if its not entirely realistic..
Alucard
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I bloody loved this!I have read ninety percent of stories on this site, and this is one of the best!
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
This is based on the classic "Dottie's Diner" comic which was never completed. Not bad, but Helga never feels like a believable character.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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