The Overflowing Bra

Sexy, steamy, yum.

I liked this story, even though I didn't care for the main protagonist that much (though I think that helped me enjoy the "curse" as the story progressed). I definitely noticed strains of your previous story "Iris' Curse" (which I LOVED and would LOVE to see a Chapter 2 of that one), and I'm very much looking forward to how strange things get in chapter 2 of this one.

I have read all but 1 of your stories and I loved them all. PLEASE write more!!!

Thanks for putting this in mht format you fucking idiot.

Great story,  I'm excited to see you writing again.
Great descriptions and reveals of the transformations.
A good flow to the story, good grammar, as far a I could tell.  A couple of spelling mistakes but more of the "skill" vs "still" variety.   For your next stories you should probably submit in .html form instead .mth as it is a Microsoft only format.
Good to see you writing again, can't wait for the next part.

Great story. You played up the weird aspect pretty nicely here, and I loved Hamamelis. My only complaint is that the TF imposed on the man from the bus was rather unimaginative, in contrast with the rest of the curses... though I suppose straight MPG was kinda obligatory in a story like this.
Regardless, I greatly look forward to the next entry in this series, and all the strange and wonderful curses that it will bring.

I was jazzed to see a new Randomking work with all the interesting transformations...then I tried to open it. Use an actually broadly accepted format in future, please.
Aside from that, interesting as usual. Not that much BE/addition, as you yourself note, but what is there is enjoyable. Would get 5 if not for the format issues (which are main source of low tech rating)
also a couple of spelling misses- flair vs. flare was the only one that really struck me. But on the whole correctly-written. (4.5/5 writing quality imo)

always a pleasure to read a randomking piece. can't wait to see the next bout of sexy insanity.

I got invalid syntax error when I clicked on it, so I had to read it in notepad.  How the hell is a Mac user supposed to read this?  Please repost in a non-Microsoft specific format.
I liked the story but I hated that damn little bitch.  I would stop at nothing short of setting the apartment on fire to get rid of her!  She'd already broken the law when she fucked with the senator.  Time to get the neighborhood quarantined and call in the Airforce bombers.  There's no room in this world for that kind of evil magic.

A truly fantastic story with lots of original & kinky ideas.
It's fantastic to see a new story after so many years :thumbs up:

Excellent, hope to read more.

Amazing! I love your work. I'm so glad to see you're still writing.

Amazing!

Well done!  Please continue with your writing.  It was a pleasure to read.

This ticks all the right boxes! Interesting characters, more believable dialogue than most stories. I felt immersed.