The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Your Heart's Desire
Due to the actions of an unscrupulous corporation, an innocent woman is chosen to be a test subject for a device that turns females into the perfect sex partners.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Very well written; you did a good job developing the plot and the scenes all flow pretty nicely. Sittin' on the weird side of the fence, but that's not something that bothers me much. >.>

Would love to see some more of the story (or whatever else) if you're feeling up for it.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Seems to have included about everything. Well written.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

very original and with lots of new narrative elements in this story, good job

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome story. Great balance of breast growth and other genres.

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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Truly excellent.

Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Rating it as a horror story which achieved the genre's goal.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

How shem is it? just curious

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