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We come to it at last. The homecoming dance is here, but the more interesting events will occur after the dance. Bethany and Ryu will each emerge from their respective after-parties differently.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 4.80
Merkitty
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The series was enjoyable, including this one, but it seemed a little rushed. I know myself with some level of writing that the finish line tends to be the thing we all strive for, and some people rush towards it.
Keep up the writing, just don't rush for the sake of finishing, a good piece of writing can be ruined by going head long into the end.
OM NOM NOM
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Seconding what everyone else said. I look forward to your next work, if there is a next work.
Nj89
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The only bad part is that the story is over.
Russian Judge
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A less controlled author would have gone for Ryu and Bethany. But you restrained yourself. You didn't even show Bethany having sex on-stage. Very nice, even romantic. Thanks for a great story.
Anti-pattern
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Incredible read... good closure to a great series.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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