The Overflowing Bra

I loved it - my favourite  type of story. I wish more people would do it as well.

BE Description: For the most part, you focused only how horny Ashley was through the story, how she tried to deal with it, then put it all on someone else. The BE really came near the end.
Characters: There are two named characters. Hence you get a 2. Although you do go on to explain the revenge and a little background info on Ashley's victim...
Technical Quality: It's... "intense". Your description of all the juicy (pun intended) action. I think it's impossible to read through this and NOT fap.
Overall: 4/5 because I like stories with intense action the same amount that I like long ones with amazing detail. Had you extended the story and included more girls to exact revenge on, It would earn all 5 points.

Well done.  I enjoyed it, although it could've been longer, and a little more description would be nice.

Good work.

Some of the spelling/gramer was a bit off (like mine), but all I can say is bring on the Bimbo Pops...I'd love to see more adventures of people who have fallen victim to them.

To hell with character development and plot!! Usually I'd say something about "standards" and "integrity" but the story is so good at being a simple wank story that it just works!
We'll let it slide this time :p

A nice short story.  Felt slightly rushed in parts, but at the same time it added to the overall "feel."
Characters weren't overly developed, but it is a short story so that's perfectly fine.  We had enough understanding of their motivations for it to move the story along.
My only real quibble would be with the BE description.  It was... adequate, and again it fit the flow and feel of the writing.  I really wanted to give it less than 3, but 2 seemed mean and unwarranted.  So 3 it is, because it worked in context.
From an authors view, I understand it can be difficult to change the flow of writing and slow it down for particular sections.  Particularly when writing from the perspective of the character.  
Still, I believe most readers observe and appreciate contrivances to express something very detailed occuring over a short time.  Even if it comes down to only a throw-away line "it was over too soon" blah blah, however you like to phrase things for the current situation.  I believe this is especially applicable to BE fiction where the BE sequences are generally the make or break.
That could of course just be my long-winded preference, I let others speak for themselves :)

Could have used more BE description but this was a pretty good continuation of the first one. Has some good strong sequel potential

A very nice little story.  Didn't try to do too much.  Keep up the good work.

I have difficulty believing that this story came from the same writer as "Unitard" and "Anniversary". Has no where near the same attention to detail or character development.