Even though the story is on the short side, I feel like the story elements were more of the focus than the TG/BE. The BE is a bit on the light side, with a larger emphasis on the TG. I enjoyed writing it, so I hope someone enjoys reading. Let's hope I don't have so many errors this time eh?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.44
- BE: 1.89
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 2.33
@ sentaste
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
The only really common formats are .PDF and HTML. .PDF gicves the author some control over the format, allowing the author to 'lock' the document .TXT and .RTF is readable too, but easily changed by others.
No one is going to go through all the trouble to download and install anything, even if it's free, just to read a single story.
To paraphrase your words of wisdom, "you'd be less of a jerk right now" if you had recommended the above.
Russian Judge
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
How can we rate this if we can't read it? Use a common format, please.
OmniTrixie
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Can we at least all agree that an F-cup final result doesn't belong in the 'huge' category?
Can't Open Blues
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Not everyone has word, don't save it as a .DOC.
Not everyone has openoffice, don't save it as a .ODT
.TXT, and .HTML are your friends.
brit
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I don't care what people use to compose these stories. Please converrt to HTML before publishing... Every other format is just a nuisance.
scooby
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
what i meant was my computer cant open the file...always comes up corrupted...maybe re-upload as doc or txt file
sentaste
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
To the previous poster: Open office is free software, so .ODT is A-okay. If it had been .WPS, you'd be less of a jerk right now.
Some minor proofreading issues ("here" vs. "her"). Could do with better transitions and more detail/depth, but not bad overall.
scooby
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Torf
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great story keep up the good work.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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