"A gust of wind flipped the book to a page with bold letters that spelled out the following, 'Warning! After you awaken your breasts, you must provide direction with one of the methods detailed in this chapter. Otherwise, your breasts will accept all inputs with unpredictable results.' Sophie didn't notice the book's warning because she was already fast asleep."
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.67
Kam
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
good story, nice and short too. There didnt seem to be much to the character development (aside from a growth aspect). there were a few minor spelling and grammar issues, but my biggest qualm is that towards the end at the pool scene, you knew they were growing, but really had very few reference points, especially as she got into the bed.
Dan Standing
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it. My favorite kind of story.
Loony
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
For whatever reason, I couldn't crack this open due to the file-type. I anxiously await reading this story, however.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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